Guidelines
The rulebook for Madame Madmoisselle — positioning, personality, audience, and the lines we don't cross. Hand this page to anyone creating on the brand's behalf.
Positioning
Essence & personality
Values
Audience
Voice rules
Full voice samples live in Voice & MessagingThe voice is clipped, declarative, and unapologetically luxurious — each sentence lands like a line in a Vogue caption, precise and visually evocative, never chatty or warm. It speaks in present-tense absolutes and sensory imperatives, borrowing the register of haute couture editorials: nouns treated as objects of desire, verbs that command rather than invite, French words deployed untranslated as markers of exclusivity.
Do
- Use present tense, declarative mood
- Deploy untranslated French nouns confidently
- Lead with materials: lacquer, gold, velvet
- Write in sentence fragments when dramatic
- Name the object, not the feeling
- Use second person sparingly, imperatively
Don’t
- Never use exclamation marks or emojis
- Avoid 'we believe' or brand manifestos
- No warmth cues: 'welcome', 'cozy', 'family'
- Don't explain or justify the price
- Never start with 'In today's…'
- Avoid question headlines entirely
Creative constraints
Don’t
- Visual: Millennial pink, terracotta, or sage green palettes
- Visual: Hand-drawn illustration or whimsical line-art
- Visual: Serif fonts that read as heritage bakery (Caslon, Garamond, Baskerville)
- Visual: Organic shapes, soft edges, watercolour textures
- Visual: Rustic textures: kraft paper, linen, exposed brick, flour dust
- Visual: Warm wood tones or natural materials signaling 'artisanal'
- Visual: Script fonts or handwritten typography
- Visual: Stock photography of smiling bakers or cozy interiors
- Visual: Abundance imagery: piles of croissants, overflowing baskets
- Visual: Gradients, rounded corners, or soft glows
- Visual: Photography with warm golden-hour softness or shallow depth-of-field blur
- Tonal: Warm, inviting, 'come as you are' hospitality language
- Tonal: Community-building or neighbourhood gathering place messaging
- Tonal: Organic, wholesome, or farm-to-table rhetoric
- Tonal: Playful, whimsical, or folksy tone
- Tonal: Self-deprecating humour or ironic distance
- Tonal: Corporate jargon or overly formal language
- Tonal: Hype words: 'artisanal,' 'handcrafted,' 'authentic,' 'rustic'
- Tonal: Apologetic accessibility ('everyone is welcome here')
- Tonal: Narrative storytelling about heritage or founder's grandmother
- Tonal: Emotional warmth or sentimental nostalgia
These constraints protect the brand's Art Deco precision and aspirational coldness — anything soft, warm, or accessible would collapse the tension between decadence and restraint, turning Madame Mademoiselle into just another boutique bakery instead of a jewellery atelier for cakes.